Our Family Reunion

Narrative Night
For a couple of weeks I have been working on a Holiday Narrative. Holiday's are fun to write about because it's like reliving the good memories again. I had a lot of choices to write about because I did a lot in the holidays. I chose to write about my long trip to Tokoroa for my Family Reunion. We put a bit of twist into our stories to make it seem a bit more fun. Really, the trip was just long and boring but in my narrative, I made it seem fun, creative and adventurous. My narrative was one page long and a quarter of the 2nd page. We also did a '2 stars and a wish' with buddies. '2 stars and a wish' is another way of saying 2 positives and 1 goal. The 2 stars are something that the reader really liked about the Narrative and the Wish is something that you could improve on next time. Here is my Narrative: